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I feel my soul being pulled towards you
Even when there's miles
And buildings
Between us
Every time I walk in the door
My eyes search you out
I want to shut out the world
Drowning in the warmth of your brown eyes
You're the one that takes my fears away
Making it so I breathe again
The one who understands
You've trusted me with knowledge you hide
From those who don't know you well
Knowing I'll protect your secret
We've crossed lines
Going back and forth
Neither wanting to turn away
Or admit the truth...


Something's not right with this poem... it doesn't flow right, doesn't feel right... thoughts?